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with this picture, i REALLY dont mind critiques.
since this is 1/3 of what i might do in my art Exam its on A3 but in the exam i have to either: do it on A2 or A1. Please Tell Me what you Think Anything? within this week i'll place up all 3 (this is one of them) and have a vote one which 1 i should do :3 this isn't cheating, im just asking for advice  Navi (C) Zelda Ed's '  ' face (C) FMABlonde Girl = LuAnne - - -  About This Picture its me in Pop-Art form, dream of things i like ontop of a cloud, but they are not what they seem to be, for this is what runs in my mind of Dreams... Candy, Games, Rainbow, ect this is ment to show how calm i am when i dream, and that everything flows nicely. you sometimes have alil dark part of your dreams but they comethrough with something good in the end. Sweet Dreams~ Comments
 I have decided to write my critique in a comment; because its a 100 word limit. :C I don't like limits.
Anyway, the first thing I say is the fairy and the technique you used with that is brilliant; shoes real effort. I like the appearance of the symbols in front of the rainbow; it makes them stand out. The dark part of the picture reflecting dreams works very subtly which I like; it makes you really think of the message behind the picture. I like the use of black on the blonde girl too. Block colour and the idea of pop art works nicely here. Come to think of it, I honestly can't think of anything negative.  Sorry about that, that's not very helpful.-- SERIOUS STUFF HAPPENS HERE  Since I can't do it the normal way;
Overall, there is an interesting and well done art style though I feel the "dream" part of it doesn't flow together as well as it could (maybe focus on a set colour for the background or spread out the rainbow) -- For the sake of Science!  That's awesome. c8 I love how you put in Ed's face lol.
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 For some reason i'm really drawn to the hair. Keep up the good work :3-- ' Eggs, milk and flour, Pancake Power!'  Wow...This piece has so many colors attacking your eye at once, it's overwhelming...Good job. :3
-- --- Jesters are kick ass yo :3 ---- ARE YOU LADIESMAN 217?! ---- It's all coolieos. ---- EMO TEAR INCLUDED!  I love the colors! This is a really cool piece!
-- People are just like Slinkies; they're good for nothing, but they always bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs. Shinon:...YEAH! I'm fine! I'll be fine...Fine, fine...Ugh...I don't feel so good. Ooh...BLAARRRGGGHHHH!  Thats awesome :}
i love the colors =3  ....Are you still doing Commisions by any chance, I think I might try and get one depending how much your asking for. o.o
...Dude....Duuude....DUDE. Dude, dude. The word dude means so many words that I cannot expalin, and because my computer is LAGGING SO MUCH. (crY) this will be a short short comment, I will come back and comment better later but my computer is REALLY lagging badly just as is it so right now I'll just keep saying dude because this is a wodnerful use in marker and thought, if I done this in my art class my teacher would of bet me up with a crowbar, she hates how I draw. I love your two blonde side fringes, there likes bananna's XD -- This is madness...THIS IS ART! Art? ...THIS. IS. MAAAAAAANGGGGGAAAA!!!! Hidden by Owner |
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The colors are eyecatching and not too intense. The pajamas matching the eyes work well. The background colors don't really seem to fit well with one another though. On one side there's an exciting rainbow, on the other there's some eyecatching hot pink, and then there's some calm light blue in the middle. I can see how it can relate to dreams, but you might consider coming up with a background that flows a little better, or seperate the pink and blue with a heavy black line like you did on the other side to clearly define the sections.
Apart from that, I think it's great! Visually interesting, quite original (except for that one corner), technique looks great (I don't see on flaw), and it has quite an impact. Overall: awesome!
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